Wednesday, July 3, 2019

17A- Elevator pitch #2

Elevator Pitch #2

I definitely noticed that I was talking very quietly and I moved a little too much. Both were very good tips for me.

I changed my tone and how loud I spoke during my elevator pitch. I tried to not move as much but also did not stand still.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Myles!
    Great job on your second pitch, I can definitely see the improvement in your presentation, especially in your voice. I like how you included several stats on the amount of plastic waste, it really solidifies your argument and supports your business service.

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  2. Hey Myles! This was an outstanding elevator second pitch blog post. You were so confident in the way you spoke which is extremely important during this act. You're standing was fine, you could hardly notice. Your service is a great business idea and I can't wait to see and hear more of it. Great job! :)

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