I changed a couple sentences here and there to make it flow a littler better and I spoke louder so that I could be easily heard. Third time is in fact the charm! Doing this assignment three times really got me comfortable with this speech and speaking in front of a camera.
Myles
ReplyDeleteYour last elevator pitch was polished and confident. You presented the knowledge on the subject that would win you credibility with your audience. I was not aware of the statistics you mentioned and it was very interesting that those numbers are not greater with environmental concerns being a topic of conversation for many years. You put together a very solid presentation. Great work.
Hey Myles,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this pitch! Like I mentioned last time, I think the addition of the stats really gives your pitch validity and supports your main argument of your opportunity.. Keep up the good work!